I actually think this is pretty realistic. I enjoyed it an like how Stephanie was the middle man in all of this. I think it's great characterization for her.

I loved how the fight quickly escalated, and I liked how you pointed out that Jo and Riley and Camille and Rhuben were linked together by the one boy they dated/were interested in. Awesome job.

Hahaha, that was good. You're right, girls do get into fights over nothing and they can escalate pretty quickly. I liked the points that each side and Stephanie made though.