i liked it..really..at least omi's not gay..-'..
hope you'll do more!

Aya a rapist? Wow, the possibilities are endless!

Oh my god! I'm shocked I don't believe Aya could do that Omi, it's to horrible. You make it sound so real, like that could happen. Poor Yoji, will he ever find out the truth?

Are you the Aki who wrote Dewa Ojama Itashimasu? You're very good at writing ncs! Write some more! They're so evil!

Wow... what can I say. That was really excellent! Very beautifully written! Loved it! "-" Hayla

I... this is... something else. Beautiful.