Liking the story so far, but... Pearl Harbor was on December 7th 1941! Sorry, bit of a history nut and a librarian. Stuff like this drives me nuts! :)

Wow, I sure did like this story even though I'm not much a fan of Pluto and Mamuro but I loved how you wrote I can't wait to read the next one.

I do have one question, what was Setsuna's daughter's name? You kept on typing Masago and Masako, so I've just been wondering which is the real one. Could you please tell me?

Ahh what a beautiful story. I love the Setsuna/Mamoru dynamic and I think this is the best story that I've ever read having to do with this topic. Loved it. And I loved how you treated Usagi.

Thank you for writing this.

aw amazing way to end the story. very good story!

WOW, THAT was fast, even for anime! I love your stories, though.

Other than the affair, which makes me mad at the characters, I LOVED this story and was relieved to see that everything turned out for the best. I thought you really captured the character's personalities, I especially loved the Haruka/Michiru interactions. I really liked how Hotaru was given more personality than I've seen in the anime and fan fics. It was a nice change from the frail depressed gothic little girl. The person you paired with Shingo was an unexpected but awesome combination (trying not to spoil it for whoever reads this review before reading the story). I've read a few of your fan fics now and I think at this point I'm going to have to put you on my favorite author's list.

This story was absolutely AMAZING.

this story makes me think of the song that claudette ortiz did with wyclef jean, two wrongs. great song. great story.

no offense but at the end of chapter 1 u got it from the last act of the sm manga

loved the story. its sad that darien did that. i know it was a spell but still it was wrong. but in the end he still ended up with his first true love serena. and got a beautiful daughter in the process. lucky for him serena was willing to forgive in the end.

your writing skills perfect but the storyit just got on my nerves pretty bad. yeah i actually yelled at my sister from the nerveusness that i got from your story. setsuna should get away from mamoru or i'll...! gr!

Wow. That first chapter made me so happy. That I'm going to stop reading and continue reading your story tomorrow. _

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Through Darkness and Light /x\

Great story, even if I personally don't like stories where Mamoru cheats at Usagi, specially with such heavy consequences.

I thought, that perhaps Usagi and Mamoru could become godparents.

In this way Masago could call him papa without suspicions, and he could act as a father.

I agree, Usa wouldn't hold a grudge. I even expected her to give some more hugs while the story (like before she go out the room in Act 18) :-)

I love it!

Wow. This truely is a beautiful story. I absolutely loved it. Sailor Pluto has got to be my favourite senshi!