|Reviews for Wingless|
| MagicMissile 5/4/13 . chapter 12
The Wingless guild are full of silly people. Arianna is definitely one of my favorites. She really constrasts with the group's temperament. Also, as entertaining as this chapter is, I can't wait to see more of their labyrinth adventures. Nice chapter and please update when you can!
| MagicMissile 4/1/13 . chapter 11
Ahh, soon 3 chapters in one week? You're on a roll! You know what, I actually liked this chapter. Instead of the usual, great character Winter usually is, this chapter shows that he actually does have flaws sometimes. Somehow, I'm starting to picture your characters more vividly too. Now, the real shocker; instead of 1 recruited, Wingless recruited 3? Mind. Blown.
| MagicMissile 3/31/13 . chapter 10
Hey, Jay. I'm back for your swift update! With the first floor complete, I can't hope to imagine what'll happen as they journey further into the dangerous labyrinth (Winter foreshadowing ominous trouble?). Man, now, Blake is a mean guy (so unnecessary of him to say that Wingless don't have teamwork!)! His agenda is even so more baffling too. Is he just wandering the lower floors to finally snag another guild to help him avenge his dead comrades? Or is he warning others of the dangers of the labyrinth itself? Hm... I wonder if he's going to die. Also, I'm dying to find out who their fifth party member is. The suspense is getting to me! Well, until next time; please update when you can!
| MagicMissile 3/28/13 . chapter 9
Winter is such a great guy. I could go on and on about him, but I like where this is going (enemy guild interactions!)! Ren and Tlachtga, too, huh? Now, those gals are awesome. Great chapter and please update when you can. Oh, and I'll definitely be voting in your poll. In fact, I did notice that your cast lacked a medic. Lol so is Blake going to turn out to be dead like the fate of Flausgal from EO2 or Hypatia/Agata from EO3? Ohh, what a tragedy! I can't wait for the next chapter. Again, I look forward to the next chapters, and please update when you can!
| MagicMissile 3/20/13 . chapter 8
Hey, back to read chapter 8 with a super long review (yay or nay?)! Unfortunately, as much as I love your fic, this chapter was somewhat more difficult to read than the other previous chapters. The beginning of chapter 8 contained so much quick alternating dialogue in the same lines that I got confused on who was saying what sometimes (somehow this problem never occured in the other chapters).
On a lighter note, Blake is a pretty cool character and happens to be named after one of my landsknechts in EO1! Honestly, I was about to flip out if you had any more mysteries about any more characters! Poor guy only has one functioning hand. NEEEWW party member anyone?
Also, best quote, "Your Huntress is weaponless, your Survivalist is barely surviving and your protector isn't going to do much protecting without a shield. Leaving is your best option at the moment." Way to stick it to them, Blake!
Oh, another thing I really liked was how you inputted that trap-door concept where Arianna stopped Rihn from the barrier. Last but not least, Rihn: her personality is really great and the mood-shifting idea is definitely something that would give her more backbone to her personality-wise, but the execution was a bit hasty. It was hard sympathize with her as the scenes went by a bit too quickly.
Anyway, tl;dr. Great update, I can't wait to see how their adventures pan out, and please update again when you feel like it!
| MagicMissile 2/27/13 . chapter 7
Ohh, I just bought Etrian Odyssey 4 today. The demo was rather fun as I was able to defeat the kangaroo FOE at level 10! Anyway, the creativity in this story is really refreshing, yet more questions and mysteries arise from them (ie: Rihn's background, etc). I hope to read more. Fun chapter and please update when you can.
| MagicMissile 2/20/13 . chapter 6
Back for ch6! Winter Rhin explosive pair ever? They're both so lively yet mysterious. I wish I knew more about them though. Also, the narrator thing? Reminds me of Rucks from the game Bastion.
| MagicMissile 2/19/13 . chapter 5
Wow, this fic is very entertaining. Everything seems to be brimming with reality; from the characters down to the plot. The environment feels rich and deep as if this story is taking place in the real world of Etria. Please update!
| Maglyt1 2/3/13 . chapter 3
This is a bit shorter than the others, but I'm not complaining it still get's the job done. I have o admit I really just loved the card magic Loi was using, I personally always did enjoy card magic but that could just be me. The cliffhanger isn't as intense as last chapter, but again not a bad thing since a repeated intense cliffhanger would be well tiring. So it's turning into a nice mix of things. Though I do wonder how a certain pink haired character will pop in, IF she is the fifth member. Also not entirely sure what Winter is, he's still fabulous.
| Maglyt1 2/2/13 . chapter 2
Aha! So now we know what some of their classes are, and yet another cliff hanger to leave us off in! Well I like how we're getting to know the characters more, and even a little bit about Winter's and Arianna's past. It still looks like everything is heading in the right direction, I mean from what I see is that these five are the team, but other than that they're really isn't much to predict. Lastly, Winter is fabulous! I just love 'him' so much at the moment, he's amazing. Keep up the good work!
| Maglyt1 2/2/13 . chapter 1
Admittedly, the beginning is a piece of outstanding work! Giving us a glimpse of the other characters, hinting to what they're classes are but not fully telling the reader. Also of course who exactly Winter is, this really grabbed my attention and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.