| Reviews for Inner Evil |
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xxFireWarriorxx 4/25/10 . chapter 1Aw... Yugi and Kaiba... friends? Now that's the sweetest thing I could hear. :D At least, having KAIBA admit it. _ Given the events after Duelist Kingdom, I find this difficult to see, but if you only focus on the aftermath of season one, I could totally see this happening. XD Anyways, OH! That makes perfect sense. :D I wasn't sure what I was expecting... like, who the enemy would be. I'd completely forgotten about that jackass of a man that Yugi banished to the shadow realm. Now he's back for revenge... UGH, everyone's out to get poor Kaiba, eh? XD Another happy ending. :D Too bad these friendships all collapse once battle city rolls around. XD Well, not really. But you know what I mean. _ |
Crystal Rose of Pollux 2/18/08 . chapter 1I love all of your Kaiba bros. stories, and I have to pick this one as my overall favorite! Seto overcame his inner monsters and saved Mokuba! I love the drama! (And the brothers' bond, too!) Exquisite work! |
Dragoon-Hard Metal System 2 6/5/05 . chapter 1Nice story! |
Babidi the Wise 10/19/04 . chapter 1Wonderful! Bravo again! |
Sugaricing 3/19/04 . chapter 1 *Cheers* Go Kaiba! You know, you should give him a girlfriend. Going through all this angst? The poor guy needs a break! ON TO THE OTHER...FICS! Icing :P |
RoMi IshUraTarMeshi 2/19/04 . chapter 1very good short story. great job._ |
EL2N 2/19/04 . chapter 1hehe |
Chibi Cheesecake 5/14/03 . chapter 1Mojobubbles: _ I'm gonna be late for lunch cuz the bell's gonna ring any minute but I had to review...I'm in compouter class right now. Kamilah: IT WAS THE FAT THING! Only...it wasn't fat... Mojobubbles: I got's to go, the bell just rang. JA NE! |
Corran And Valin 5/8/03 . chapter 1Another good story! This is one of three of my fav stories that you have done so far, I luv this one! I like the part where Mokuba calls him from under the desk HAHA! Keep up the good work! |
SetoRulez 12/21/02 . chapter 1Very good! The plot was imaginative and the story was pretty believable - in that it might happen on Yu-Gi-Oh, of course. Good work over all, keep it up! - SetoRulez |
JessiChi 11/26/02 . chapter 1Wheee |
Eriko Myoujin 11/13/02 . chapter 1*sniff* Aww! That's so kawaii! ;_; *kicks the dark Seto dude* You're so good at Seto n' Mokuba fics... write another one. ; Hee hee. Please? *begs* BTW- Thank you for reviewing my fic too! *hugs you* _ Yes, the dialogue is pretty close to the original Japanese dialogue... I changed it around a bit though. ; |
torpedo 9/16/02 . chapter 1This was a really cool story! |
Ikari 8/13/02 . chapter 1 Yeah a sequel! I like just as much as the first! _ |
SashaFan9278 JPJr 8/7/02 . chapter 1Coool story! :) Very exciting and intriguing! A great sequel to "Mental Lapse" :) |