Aww Tenshi, you did well in writing this.
You kept Hariya stick to his characters, so very well done for you !
Keeping characters stick to their character is the most important thing to do, otherwise they are not 'them'.

This is the better version of the CG and Hariya could've won my heart if I heard his POV like I did here _

I'd be happy to read other fanfiction of yours, seriously _

Can't wait to read your Hikami's one!

oh, i really like this? heroine x hariya's first meeting, but the heroine seems has more character in your story than in the original.

actually i don't understand why hariya kounoshin is a weird name. i think it's uncommon, but still fine.

good one! keep up!

my heart went 'doki doki' and I laughed a story is pretty for the treat ()/