I think the story is great, and that is a perfect ending. However,
maybe more proof-reading next time. Otherwise, :) :) :) :) :) :)

This was great, especially for a first timer. Do continue!

Brilliant! Wonderful! I loved it! I think you captured the characters of Gomez and Morticia perfectly! It was also very sweet! I also loved Gomez's dream! Please do consider continuing! :D

I liked it a lot! Very cute :)