|Reviews for Home?|
| BellaLovesEdwardMoreThanJake 4/15/13 . chapter 1
| Jay 4/9/13 . chapter 24
Good story and sad endind like when I saw Colonel Hughes die in FMA
| Jay 4/8/13 . chapter 17
You should definatly watch Bleach or Sgt. Frog. P.S. YOU ARE THE BEST WRITER EVER!
| Challen Evergreen 3/22/13 . chapter 24
So no i didn't cry, but damn if I didn't want to.
Okay so here it goes, don't take any of this as mean pretty please, this is just my review at the end.
I started this story thinking I was going to honestly hate it and quite half way threw. As I've noticed you admit several times, there are quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but that's to be expected of a first story, or even a one hundredth one. I will admit, sometimes your paragraphs were small and I started out absolutely hating the whole scene thing...
Now with all of that said - and there really was a reason I promise - I want to say that I'm glad I finished it. Even with all the English type mistakes and the story line being "cliched" as the one reviewer put it, I absolutely adored it. It wasn't something I'd read if I was wanting some great big mystery to put me on the edge of my seat, but it was definitely worth reading. I really hope you continue writing stories because with the ability to keep attention, even with the mistakes, you could be great after some practice.
So all in all, I loved it and I'm definitely going to be favoriting this sucker. :)
| INUYASHA 101 3/1/13 . chapter 24
Ok I will cry later not now but that was so sad omg I am cring byebye
| The one who writes the ones 3/2/13 . chapter 24
Sooooooo sweet! Great idea to end story like that!
| Liz Nekogami 3/2/13 . chapter 24
Is that it? Is it over?
| Liz Nekogami 3/2/13 . chapter 23
What the heck!
| innocentanimefan 3/2/13 . chapter 24
* tears pouring down the sides of my face * WHYYYYYYYYY!
| innocentanimefan 3/2/13 . chapter 23
Why would you write that! Its so sad I felt a piece of me die with Inu!
| Inuyashainy 3/2/13 . chapter 24
It was hard not to cry but I didnt and u wrote an awesome story
| desertrommel 3/2/13 . chapter 23
Don't worry, it was a typo. This one of my favorite stories.
| coulditbegirlx 3/2/13 . chapter 24
oh my god... one sad thing after another... how dare you make me want to cry!
no but seriously that was soo well written ,im really happy that Izayoi was able to grow a sense of hearing, i was scared there. and her and shippo! :D and Isamu and Noa! :D
but it was very sad, the youngest and dying the oldest. poor kagome!
im glad you didnt write in when inuyasha died like not a flashback, cause i dont want to see how kagome would react to his death, she would go crazy i think /3
it was a happy ending though, even though they all died, kagome was finally able to go see them again :)
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand, i love how you answered the title, their home really was with every one they lovedd :) 3
brilliant story, so sad its over, cant wait for more stories by you :D keep on writing :D
(oh btw about your last chapter, where you were amazed about people in other countries, i understand, it really is amazing, ive been out of my country once (im Canadian...eh?) hhaha
| coulditbegirlx 3/2/13 . chapter 23
omg that was depressing, god i wanna cry right now !
but... you pick another one of my name ideas! YES ! i knew they would name a girl Izayoi and also kikyo, even though i never said it to you haha
great minds think alike
she sounds beautiful, but its tragic that she is blind and deaf , god i dont even know how shes gonna grow up, like helen keller
| INUYASHA101 2/27/13 . chapter 22
Ahhhhhhhhhh I love it omg is at a guy is it a girl ahhhhhhh I want to see sry the fangirl in me has takin over lol