This is an incredible note upon which to end this.

This is top-notch skill.

Wow. Your writing never ceases to amaze me.

I think this is a very powerful chapter. Sherman Potter has experienced three wars and some how he had succeeded in staying strong and healthy in his mind.

I am looking foward to see which MASH character is in the next chapter.

This story is very different from other MASH stories because it makes the reader think about the real cost of war.

Chilling, so very chilling! Margaret tastes blood in her lipstick.

I got goosebumps! haha Margret was such a beautiful & loving person. I was intrigued how she was preparing herself for her love & her delight in life .. to realize she prolly lives it over & over again!

It's so sad! Kinda haunting! I can totally see these being short mini skits ... I can see them in my head ... OMG it would be perfect!

Keep going I can wait to read the whole cast! .. Radar & Klinger! OMG haha Can't wait to read them!

WOW to continuing reading the repetition of this really gives it that touch of nut hut haha

I loved it. At first I was like hmm Charles .. same ole Charles ... but there was a touch of unknown ... was he really this in touch with himself after everything he had scene and been through in the prior years (I've watched MASH since I was a kid) & once reaching the end to have "war" writing this... it shows no matter how you try and keep hold of yourself through the damndest things .. something as trivial as war takes such a greater hold!

I really liked it .. repetition & all!

Look forward to reading more!

Heartbreaking result of war. It can never be erased from Charles' memory.

This is an excellent start! I can't wait to read more! This is the first story I've seen that shows the affects of the war on the characters, and it is very well written!

Wow. I like this so far. Show how each character is torn up by the way. Amazing start, I like how you started with Charles. :D Keep going please!

so good, i would be very interested in seeing more!