You did a great job describing what a victim would feel!

Ohhhhh my god.

This was excellent. You have good grammar skills and a way with words that was very pleasing to read. You fleshed out your OCs nicely, and as I read, the stark terror from the outsider POV was almost palatable. I was hooked from the beginning!

Thank you so much for posting!

I liked it - you really did a great job with the victim's view of things!

This was good! I love pure case!fic, but good ones are hard to find, which made it that much more enjoyable! I did know about the Youngs, and AC/DC, my music taste mirroring Deans in many respects :)