This is very good

Ok, I want to see where you're going with this! Please update soon!

Wait. Why is Obi-Wans Ahsokas master?

Fallen angle? ! Yay, another one of those stories.:)

Nice! A bad version of Angels. You know I only read one other fanfiction that had a fallen angel, this is a nice story. Hope you continue.

First: Thanks for this awesome story, dedicated to me. It's nothing really, I just help with what I love to do, but you're great on your own.

Second: this story, the first time you showed it to me, seemed confusing, but now I'm loving it! I love it so far and can't wait till you update... I love the cliffhanger and you really built on your suspense at the end.

Continue, please!

OMG! Cliffhanger. Wow. This is great! Can't wait to read more.
Interesting concept for the creatures. I like it.