|Reviews for Windfall|
| Abe Lincoln Lover 10/22/12 . chapter 23
Your writing is amazing! I wish I could write chapters even half of yours! So, it's been about five years. Please tell me you didn't die!
| Chibi Tenshi Sama 3/8/12 . chapter 23
So, four and a half years later of 'to be continued' and I'm starting to wonder. Brilliant story though. So much happening.
Keep up the good work!
| mountainelements 2/24/12 . chapter 23
Amazing story. I'm just sad that it's .. on hiatus? abandoned? I'm not sure. I know that you say that it's on vacation on your profile, but that hasn't been updated since 2010.
I hope that Kaito doesn't fall for his family's plans. I have a slight suspicion that they burned down his house, but that doesn't seem quite right. The weird thing about this story is that it's incredibly long but also seems to move very slowly. I think that it's all the detail that include in the story.
I love your Ayumi and I hope that we get to see a scene from Hakuba's perspective at some point. I can't figure out what he's thinking.
| AppleCider1412 12/26/11 . chapter 1
it's been years. i HIGHLY doubt Ysabet has thought about updating her old stories.
i hope she does soon. i REALLY love this one. it has more thought than most and it has an interesting story. i hope she writes more
but again, i doubt she'd even update ANYTHING. it's been years on this one
| Partsu 8/28/11 . chapter 23
tasty this lil' story...tastier than most.
| Rainbowlalaland 7/23/11 . chapter 1
Very good, I like it so far xD
| Isangtao 4/5/11 . chapter 1
I love this fic, please update soon.
I really see nothing to criticize.
The only thing I want is that a new chapter be uploaded as soon as you have the time.
| apple-06 2/17/11 . chapter 23
OMG! His house got burnt? Poor Kaito... :( He has too much stuff to worry about. The pandora gem, Ayumi, Aoko, his relatives, Nakamori- keibu, 'the short brigade' and the Black Organization... OMG!
Need the next chapter! Is Kaito even gonna care? What about the stuff Heiji found out? Will the 'short brigade' tell him about Kaito? Too many questions!
PLEASE Update soon!
| astronoutvampire 2/5/11 . chapter 23
this is great. you should finsh it. it has been over 3 years scine he last update.
| Jean Curtis 1/28/11 . chapter 23
I think it's rather... disappointing that you aren't continuing this. I see that you have your hands busy with other projects, but this story really caught my interest. (READ: Dragged me in and didn't let me go.)
Your very original plotline appealed to my 'Superhuman Kaito' wants, and how you've set up the characters (Personalities, Faults, etc.) almost made me believe that they were actually TALKING. It is a very skilled work of fiction that you have crafted, here.
I enjoyed the humor you have sprinkled throughout this story - and chapter 16 is my favorite so far. I loved how you introduced Kaito's family, and the trials that you've set up for out favorite magician.
I wonder what they had planned for Ayumi-chan.
Although, I do have some criticism to offer up as well. They way that you've presented the character's thoughts were confusing, with the * or ;; or whatever else you used. Otherwise, I have absolutely no complains about your style of writing. It's a total work of art.
I hope you will continue this, even if you cut it short.
| Katara Falcon 11/25/10 . chapter 23
this is one of the most interesting fics ive read in a while!
keep it going! 3
| Catkyn 11/5/10 . chapter 23
*pokes at story tentatively* I -think- it's in a coma, now, it's been a few years...
...but! This is an awesome story. I have been having -far- too much fun reading this, and I'm going to go curse at you for a little bit over lost sleep, and why-did-it-end-there, and all the little 'but I wanna KNOW!' moments that keep showing up and being delayed, or buried, or just forgotten for a while before showing back up again.
It is a very good thing I have no work today; I found (and started reading) this yesterday afternoon-ish. Since it now qualifies as -morning-, and not every really early morning at that...the lack of sleep was totally worth it, I swear. Even if I do currently have a light headache from reading for so very long.
Congrats on an awesome story, a great chapter, and here's hoping that the next installment won't be another 3 years in the making. On the other hand, Three Thieves is really damned awesome, and I think I'd cry if updates on that paused just so this one could be finished. So, have fun with the writing! I'm looking forward to it, whatever it happens to be.
| Darra Greymist 10/20/10 . chapter 23
...remember how you said you wouldn't do the taking-forever-to-update thing again. I DON'T BELIEVE YOU. but, but, you're doing SUCH A FREAKING AWESOME JOB on Three Thieves... can we have more of BOTH? please?
Kaitou Kid emoticon 3
| idia199 9/21/10 . chapter 23
I think this is a brilliant story,it's well written and the character interactions are very interesting to read. Really, your way of describing Hattori, Hakuba and Ayumi is great. And Kudo and Kuroba and associates are so well written too. The story does not only make one curious for what happens next, it also makes me laugh. That is usually hard to find together with a nice plot, which this story has. And I have a habit of collecting the really brilliant pieces of the stories I read for easy access, with this story it were at least 50 pages of really interesting interactions, comments etc. Which is quite a lot. So I'll definitely be waiting for the next part of this story.
| SakuraS41 8/6/10 . chapter 23
I love ur stories from The Window up until this chapter of Windfall.. I hope you can update this story soon.. It just makes me addicted even though it's long and it takes more than 30 minutes for a chapter but I enjoy the story..