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nequam-tenshi 7/29/09 . chapter 23
That sounds too wild fro me to be in South America...I am sorry for your marriage and glad that cancer has not caused you the lose of your life.

Please do update soon!
nequam-tenshi 7/28/09 . chapter 19
the Organization is more than cruel to children than I thought!
nequam-tenshi 7/27/09 . chapter 16
So far it's day 3 of me reading your story! Love your work but I wonder how you came up with this story? Was is the Titanic that influenced it or more of the Black Organization that created the scene?
nequam-tenshi 7/27/09 . chapter 14
Is Kaito really afriad of fish in the anime?
nequam-tenshi 7/27/09 . chapter 12
kittens are adorable but I wonder if the cat will come along with them?
nequam-tenshi 7/26/09 . chapter 11
So the black Organization has foundd out who he is?

*sigh* It's taken me roughly 7-8 hours reading just 11 chapters! I wish I could read faster...

How come you haven't completed this story by now?
nequam-tenshi 7/26/09 . chapter 6
He finally found Pandora's Gem!
OliveTheOlive 6/18/09 . chapter 23
First of all, I want to say that I have so much respect for you and your ability to write /this much/. *struggles to take it all in*

I basically read nonstop from "The Window" through this story. And it took me days to get through it all (during summer too, when I really don't have enough to do with myself). And I love having something to read, so that's a good thing.

That said, I want to say that I really, really hope that you pick up this story again sometime. (Translation: More proof of Not-Dead-ness please!)

Umm, I really love how this story grew, in that it started out as a fairly simple idea, and you just kept writing to see what would happen next.

The supernatural stuff is also loads of fun, I really like your ideas, what Pandora ended up doing, the whole history behind the Black Org. One of my favorite things is your dreamscapes. The whole "split" of Shinichi/Conan's consciousness is really interesting, and I also like that both he and Ran/Rin end up in the last place they were before they were shrunk. It's a little eerie, but I just love how you used the whole dreamscape idea, especially in "Second Wind"

I also like how much you expand on Ayumi-chan's character. It's about time one of the kids got to take on a major role. D Ayumi giving Conan heart attacks with magic tricks and Kid's grin is vastly amusing.

I'm really hoping for more chapters someday, please write them? We all need to hear about the fate of Ayumi's favorite juggling stone, and Kaito's ensuing struggles against the monster that is "The Relatives". Not to mention the demolition of Professor Agasa's home at the paws of the Cat from Hell (now with supernatural powers included!)

So keep writing. Because I want to know what happens next.
Ebil Stasia 5/6/09 . chapter 23
This story is Awesome. With a capital A. And I think you need to write another chapter. Or two. Or ten...

You made me laugh a whole lot while I was reading this story. My roommate starting giving me odd looks after awhile.
charuangelgirl08yahoo.co.in 4/29/09 . chapter 23
MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!...PLEASE...!AND SON...!
charuangelgirl08yahoo.co.in 4/21/09 . chapter 23
hello..anyone alive there? pls pls pls update soon...
charuangelgirl08yahoo.co.in 4/13/09 . chapter 23
more! more! more!...and son...!pls
charuangelgirl08yahoo.co.in 4/10/09 . chapter 23
pls pls pls update soon...its suck an amazing fic...
charuangelgirl08yahoo.co.in 4/7/09 . chapter 23
please please update soon...its been so long...too long...i cant wait...need i say more?
charuangelgirl08yahoo.co.in 4/1/09 . chapter 23
well is this story GREAT or what!...i mean i just cudnt stop reading it and my mom threatened to take way my laptop if i didnt decrease the time i spend on my laptop...but i was glued nevertheless...and now i can only PLEAD for you to update really really soon...cant wait!
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