Beautiful! I love this!

Loved it! I always wondered what would have happened if LeBeau hadn't let himself being rescued and pulled to shore that easily. It's great that you put the part with the wrist watch in your story, a nice nod to the actual episode! Mike being mischievous there is just fun. :)

This was great, meixel! Thanks so much for sharing this!

Real good ending, loved the care and concern Mike showed toward Steve. You have great talent for capturing these two characters!

Great WHI for this episode. There were a few of them out there that needed this treatment!

This is far more thrilling than the original ending of "Timelock". You've delivered a very suspenseful scene. Mike's trepidation and feeling of helplessness jumped off the page. I liked how you had Mike portrayed as not being a good swimmer - it provided the perfect reason behind his rising panic as he tries to save Steve.
Thank you for posting this here :-)

Don't know the original ending, but I'm sure that it is not half as good as this!