| Reviews for The Letter That Was Never Received |
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Alicia Mirza 5/28/13 . chapter 1Hey! I see I'm not the only one who thought about what would ahve happened if Petunia was a witch. I'm not sure if something like this could happen. However, I guess even magic can be wrong. It's actually a very interesting drabble. I would love to see some type of sewual to it from you! I didn't spot any mistakes. Alicia :) |
AnnaRavenheart 5/28/13 . chapter 1Oh dear, Petunia actually got a letter for Hogwarts. I really didn't expect it. What irony! She so much wanted to get accepted, and her admittance letter got lost. I wonder how many things it would change. I'm so much tempted to write a Magical!Petunia right now, I hope you won't mind if one day I use your idea :) I adored this, I didn't spot any mistakes, just the address confused me, because they lived close to Snape, but it's a trivial thing. It was short, but brilliant. Wonderful job! |
selenehekate 5/27/13 . chapter 1Ohh, that's awful. I absolutely love the plot of this piece; it's so sad! This drabble has great SPAG, and I love your characterization of Minerva. Poor Petunia. The irony is so sad! I am uncertain as to if that address is where Lily and Petunia lived, though. Didn't they live by Snape's place? So that's a little confusing. Other than that, though, good job! |
accio gold 4/14/13 . chapter 1But didn't Petunia write to Dumbledore and he replied apologising and saying that she couldn't attend Hogwarts due to her not being a witch? |
Zireael07 2/15/13 . chapter 1This is brilliant! |
MDunn22 2/6/13 . chapter 1Not sure if this is a one-shot but I hope it's not. I think you could make this really good! |
the queen of slurking 2/5/13 . chapter 1Oh my goodness... I can just imagine the domino effect from this. I liked this. Petunia being a witch isn't something I've seen a great deal of in fanfiction. I feel like this could have a sequel, maybe something where Petunia finds out she's a witch? My only issue with this is that it's so short, I would've liked to read more. On the other hand I can sort of understand why it's short, because it sort of fits Minerva's thoughts and having it too long could kind of feel forced, like you're just spinning it out for the sake of a long word count. Anyway, it's good. TQOS |
Guest 2/5/13 . chapter 1 But it may not have been as it was supposed to. |
Guest 2/5/13 . chapter 1 /3 feels, right in the feels |
MistressParamore 2/5/13 . chapter 1oh my...never saw that coming! |
Saeshmea 2/5/13 . chapter 1OMG! Please, tell me you're going to write a story, I don't care if short... But it would be great to know what could have happened... Or if Minerva will do something about the letter. I really love the idea... So few words and they left me :O |
Princess Luna of the NLR 2/4/13 . chapter 1That would've been horrible if she was supposed to get a letter but she never did! D: |
griffin blackwood 2/4/13 . chapter 1amazing idea |
DarkDramaLady 2/4/13 . chapter 1Oh no. No. No. No. This. Just no, please, the idea that this brings is terrifying. |
Cookies-and-Ink 2/4/13 . chapter 1Casually heartbroken :( I can just imagine this happening and it makes it all the more tragic, how Petunia was treated and in turn the way she treated Harry... If only they'd have known, how different everything could have been - exactly like you said. :( :( :( |