This already seems very interesting, I wonder how this will turn out. Please update soon!

Great Chapter.

Hello again...I am a very big fan of ur work. I love ur way n style of writing...I love the unusualness of it as well and how different and stand alone it seems to be:). Very eloquent

I like the wording u use in this story and I also like the turn it seems to take from ones everyday fanfic...u did good and I'd really love to read more...

So please don't wait too long to update

Take the liberty to tweak it to your hearts content, not that you need my permision:) but I do ask that you continue.
I would like to see how the team interacts and how well Sasuke would be as a leader.
Please update whenever you can.
( "-" )/

Really cool start! I can't wait to see where this goes!

Nice start and nice writing. If only Sasuke had been this rational in the manga...Anyway, looking forward to more!

You're back! XD
This made my day. Good start! Looking forward to more. :)

it was awesome

This is an interesting concept. I like how you have handled it so far and I am looking forward to see how the story shapes up over time.

Looks good so far. Keep up the great work! i eagerly await the next chapter.

It could be interesting story. I'm waiting for more.