I don't know why you dislike the way this came out. Personally, I think it is spectacular. I can't wait to read more of it.

Another great chapter, looking forward to 'seeing' Nuju's expression when he and Kualus get rescued by Matoro

First chapter seems like it's off to a great start! Can't wait for more! :D
yush more nuju and matoro XD You've made me love those two characters even more than I did before!

Colour me officially hooked, girl! Can't wait to find out more about our favourite Ko-Matoran!
*Favs and follows*

Hooked and eager for more.

THIS IS SO FRICKING EPIC!