....wow....

That was amazing. For having so little information on who Hikou really is (they don't provide much, do they?) you've really captured exactly what I thought he'd be like. This was so depressing to read! You play emotions well, Chaotic Serenity (i love your name.. :) I am in *awe* of you... great job!!!

My god is he bitter! Damn... I don't know what to think, but he really doesn't like water and I get a feeling he doesn't like "John" too much either. But it is still very nicely written, I like it. It's certainly dark and bitter. You capture his state of mind so beautifully.

O, wow. Nice fanfic. I agree with you that suzaku is indeed cruel(just look at what he let all his sichisei and their enemies go through -_-;)Poor Hikou. I hope it does turn out well for him in the end. He's not really evil.

Bitter... shame... hate... pain beyond pain and suffering beyond eternity. This story reminds of a friend of mine who's suicidal and speaks in the very same way Hong/Hikou sees the world. He is here upon this world, with no other reason than to help give his best friend the life he should have had, to pay a penance he cannot possibly pay. Dark, self-deprecating, sacrifical... what a way to live.

And I was fascinated by it. I don't think I enjoyed it in the way I'd enjoy a lighter fic, but this one is deep- deep enough to drown in. It brought me in and gently held me as I read it, rather than grabbing me by the shoulders and shaking me until I finished. I'm a huge Chichiri fan, but I do find Hikou to be as interesting as his more famous counterpart and liked the change in perspective. Amazing writing here, Serenity-san, and I hope to catch more of your stories in times to come.

*bliks*
Wow! That was .. dark .. and sad you could say. you have thought of this in very deep. I haven't red Hikou's side of the story before. this is realy well done! *pats her eyes with a tissue*
on this fic Hikou totally got my sympathy ... though the old jealous raised it's ugly head again.
I hope yer gona continue this.
Will he stand 'till the wedding seremony?
will he get forgivnes?
will Chichiri and Kouran get FINALLY an happy ending?

WOW! Oh my god... *in awe* I wanna learn to write like that. I LOVED THIS FIC!!! DAA!!! OK. But this was amazingly written. I really wish I could write like that na no da. Post some more fics sometime, ne?