Aww it was soo good

*does a Xena like cry*

Loved it.

xx
Kat

Loved it
Well done.
You've got the characters just right, good job!
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Love Holly

You could easily expound on this piece here. I enjoyed the tension and the dialogue, it was seemingly perfect. Even though you wrote and posted Enlightenment last year, maybe you could briefly consider adding Rory breaking up with Dean, or maybe not... could be kind of cliche to write... but we all love it when Floppy Hair gets the boot, he's so damn good it's easy to dispise him! And we all adore Jess, because he's misunderstude and broody. Thanks for the pleasant read! Keep it up!

omg awesome fic, that was fantastic!

You're too good at this, it's not fair. lol

My eyes are darting back and forth across the screen, and I'm reading faster then I knew I could. And the further down the page I get, the further open my mouth drops.

Me = Pathetic.
You = Talented beyond words.

WOW! The tension in this story is fantastic, not to mention the kiss itself. Beautifully written.

Once again, you've blown me away. This is why fanfic is worth reading... because you've made me crave your stories more than the show itself. Thank you for sharing your creativeness, imagination, and talent with us. :)

Gahhh! Whats with this hiatus thing? Please, for the love of Mike write more of your wonderful stories! The suspense is killing me here.

I did like it, I liked their nervous book chatter, and I liked the way he forced the issue with her about the kiss(I was really afraid the show was going to emasculate him, the way they did with Dean. I was glad they did that scene in ep2 where he yelled at her about not contacting him over the summer!).

You did a good job capturing the moment.

Are you ever gonna start writing Trory fics again?

what can i say?
WOW!
you are truly the most talented writer i've ever come across in ff.net . the way you express the characters's feelings are soo realistic. keep up the work and keep these rory/jess fiction coming!
:)

Oh, boy. Once again, you've written an amazing fic, and once again, I'm at a loss for words. Great job, Luce.

is that it? hopefully theres more. i thot this story was geat so far. how u wrote it was amazing. i felt everything u wrote. not most stories did that. but this one i great. u should put up more chapters.

wow. as always "luce" you still amaze me with your rory/jess fanfiction..i've never actually commented before...but i've waited so loong fora new story and i've decided it'd only be right for me to comment! lol. i loved "crash and burn" and always wondered why you never continued it! if you don't feel like answering its fine by me, no worries! i'll still be a fan of your fiction! gosh i wish i had your writing talent. i haven't been around fan fiction much...just clickin on links to get to your stories through fanforum.net literati message boards...or through bookends.net....any ways i really must go now, enough rambling from me! keep up the AMAZING job and take care! ;)