|Reviews for With Half So Good a Will|
| GreatDarkNoodleKing 2/9/13 . chapter 1
ALL THE FEELSSSSSSSSSS *cries forever and ever and ever*
| BoredomIsAnUnderstatement 2/7/13 . chapter 1
*holds back the tears* Oh god, after all that sadness, this is the perfect ending. I was more than a little shocked at what Jaime said, but I guess that was just the kick in the ass Jack needed. I really liked how you conveyed all of their pain - it's such a way to grow and you built it up so perfectly. I don't really know what to say, except thank you for writing these.
| Kaito Dark 2/6/13 . chapter 1
Thank You for telling me there was a sequel. Ending is more optimistic, but I still want more) Somehow I feel as though this story was rushed - it isn't as descriptive as Thou Bleeding Piece of Earth. Or maybe it's just me, cause I've exam on friday... All in all, it's good as sequel - cause Thou Bleeding Piece of Earth left me feeling, like, hopeless, and now - I feel as if though everything will be good again. Will You maybe write another sequel? The one where Pitch will be reborn as human? Like, Jack meets teenage Pitch, who doesn't remember him, doesn't even believe in him, maybe Pitch can even have his some of his natural abilities intact - like, one look on anyone and he can tell what that person is afraid of. The relationship between him and Jack slowly developes, cause Pitch doesn't remember him - but he falls in love again... Then he dies, becomes a spirit again - and makes up with guardians. Happy slash for all)))