|Reviews for Ashfur the Ghost|
| Secretly Imaginative 3/1/13 . chapter 4
Reaaly D: poor POOR hollyleaf. I have no idea why but the whole conversation about their neighbors was funny lol :P
| Guest 2/10/13 . chapter 2
Ooh, LionXHeather! How old are they in this story?
| Secretly Imaginative 2/11/13 . chapter 3
Wow Ashfur is invisible to everyone except Hollyleaf. That sucks :(
| Cinderfire16 2/11/13 . chapter 3
Okay, so Hollyleaf knows what happened to Ashfur, but she didn't kill him. Now he's making her seem schizophrenic by appearing out of nowhere? Bad Ashfur! Don't drive Hollyleaf insane!
| Cinderfire16 2/10/13 . chapter 2
So Hollyleaf killed Ashfur... what's her reason this time?
| Secretly Imaginative 2/10/13 . chapter 2
Whoa, murder guy is like back from the dead. Oh, no, Hollyleaf!
| Featherpool16 2/10/13 . chapter 2
Pleeeazzzz, this is HORROR!
AHHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHA HAHAHAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHH
| Secretly Imaginative 2/7/13 . chapter 1
I see that your French (since you said that in your profile lol) and its probably hard to write an English story. Try using this- ", instead of the dash mark when someone is speaking. For example: "Hi."
I like this story, and if you need any help with any kind of English writing please PM if you want, I wouldn't mind helping. Anyways please continue! :)