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| Agena K. 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great story! "He thought of his friends getting inebriated on beer. How stupid when they could have Alfred's chocolate." Now if only that were true... |
| Creative Spark 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuselol, cute. Poor Dick. A Neon, that's harsh. -Creative Spark |
| Lihau 2006-09-10 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! Funny... very funny! |
| Luc Star 2005-09-16 ch 1, | abusehehe... ok.. funny.. got a little serious in the latter parts of the story.. but i'm glad everything worked out. later. |
| VeltaIO 2004-11-30 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this. Thanks |
| bessie1 2004-04-27 ch 1, | abusewritten but for you I'll make that exception. i love your character portrayal. One of the previous reviewers is correct... you must have a teenage son, Dick's sounds completely apt for his age. I also loved reading about your Bruce as a father... I wouldn't have that thought that was a role he was familiar with but you make him handle the role as a parent with ease. Very impressive. |
| Ian Nathaniel Cohen 2002-10-13 ch 1, | abuseNice. Very funny, very well-written. Much better than most of the other so-called humor stories around here. |
| seby 2002-08-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou MUST have a teenage son! Sounds just like one! Reminds me of mine... Great story! Really enjoyed it. I love the relationship you have with these two. I also like reading a Bat story that makes me chuckle *and* is WAFF-full. My favorite kind! |
| Rogue Knight1 2002-08-22 ch 1, | abuseI can appreciate this a lot more now I'm actually in college. And all my Dad gave me was a used laptop. |
| lucidscreamer 2002-08-14 ch 1, | abuselol |
| QOShea 2002-08-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved this story when you posted it to the list and it's just as funny the second reading! LOL, "Not the Neon." |
| teazer 2002-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abusei know just how dick feels... i wanna jeep too... teaz |