wow

pain

hurts

omg! This is such a cute story ^^

*lips quivers* wah! It just make me wanna cry so much and hold poor little Gojyo!T-T nicly written and I love the whole scene where they are in the parlor.Keep this up!

This is beautiful. I really like the way you've captured these characters.

Well done.

Ah! so very sad. But still loving it. This is quite well written. - zan

awsome! poor Gojyo!

this is an interesting take on how gojyo may have acquired(spelling?) his weapon. so we want to know more of course!

Gojyo's so lucky to have a cool big brother! ^_^ I love what Jien tells him.

Great job!

Aww, that's so sweet! I love this story! Gojyo's eleven year old POV is extremely cute and very well written. Please continue.

I just love Gojyo! (though Sanzo is better -dreamy sigh-) this is actually the first fic i've read on read on Gojyo/Jien relationship and i LOVE IT! WA I WANT TO READY MORE, MORE MORE! Please update soon, please!

Nice Fic. Heart wrenchingly good.
You've really stayed true to Goyjo's character, I will be waiting with baited breath for updates.
-A-N-

Aww, this is so cute! I've been looking everywhere for "young" Gojyo stories, and I'm pretty sure this is one of the best ones I've read! The relationship between him and Jien is adorable. So cute, can't wait for more!

oh my this was wonderfully and beautifully sad. pure love.

Aw...so sad but i love it! I hope you update soon!

Whoa, this was truly an amazing story. You captured Gojyo *perfectly*. You gave his character more depth, and to his brother as well. Your scene descriptions were perfect, and painted a very vivid picture to even the dullest of imaginations. I really loved your story, and although sad, it was very moving. It made me feel sorry for the poor kid! Anyway, it was really good.