** sick dude! I knew Chief Brian Irons was a sick and demented **, and I didn't need to know what his "hobbies" were, thought it does tell you in the game. You protrayed him perfictly. I couldn't have done better because I will never try to wright about him. All in all, a great story. That should be a no brainer because I read it even though I hate Chief Brain Irons.
Another fantastic short story. ^_^ The way you depicted Irons freaking out and stuff was great! Sounds just like it would fit in with the RE continuity ^^
Mmm, this gives me an idea to make a scenario where Leon mets Chief Irons and Sherry, while Claire meets Ada and Ben...mmmm....