|Reviews for Finding Love At Last|
| Takerslady 7/26/06 . chapter 1
Awesome story, You are officially my bestfriend. Kane and Taker are your favorite wrestlers, and you're obsessed with them. We could be sisters LOL. I sleep and breath BOD. My aim is DeadmansChanda. And incase you have MSN my address is :D
| TheAngryPrincess13 11/24/04 . chapter 1
Cool...You should make more...
| This account exists no more 6/30/04 . chapter 1
Thius was really good. I like Taker/Trish pairings. Either that or Taker/Miss Jackie pairings. I really enjoyed that.
| Shinna 2/4/04 . chapter 1
This was a really interesting fanfic. Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
| Gallantmon70560 3/9/03 . chapter 1
The village bycicle strokes again!
| OrtonsGurl 8/31/02 . chapter 1
You naughty girl! Lol, you've read too many of my books, what have i done? Nah, that was funny! I'll ttyl.
_DeViL oN a RaMpAgE_
| TanB 8/19/02 . chapter 1
WOW... I love The Undertaker and Trish Stratus is my favorite Diva also. I was so excited when I saw this story. I thought it was great. You have to add amother chapter or two. Or maybe, write another one. I really wish that they would be worked into a storyline for real. I liked how you slowly joined the two characters without jumping into the romance right away.
Keep up the good work and I'll be anxiously looking for some more tales.
| Anonymous 8/19/02 . chapter 1
Wow! Great story. And original too. Definitely a good pairing that deserves some attention. You've got good taste ...
| DeadGrlWalking89 8/14/02 . chapter 1
Hey that was really, really GOOD! I'd say write a sequel!
| twinkylady 8/8/02 . chapter 1
Not a bad story, it's a different pairing, which I like. I have only a few small suggestions:
1) Your codes are displaying at the beginning and end of every sentence - you may want to check those.
2) You start out writing in the present tense, and switch to the past tense. A piece of work should be written entirely in one tense or the other. Switching back and forth can be jarring to the reader. It's fairly difficult to write entirely in the present tense, so you may want to switch the whole thing to past tense.
3) Your rating might be a little low for the scene at the end...I know if my child were 13 I wouldn't want them reading about oral sex so it might need to be bumped up to an "R" rating.
Anyway, keep up the good work!