tha was bad

that was cute but they were some typos and missing words.

um... it was good? i thought it would be more about roxton an marguerite but *shrugs* i thought it was funny. btw update "nightmares" hury hury hury nownownow kantwaitkantwait!

i know this story was written ages ago but i just read it and it was soo cute, great lil story!

Aww! That was adorable! I loved it!

I think you should write more. That's such a little piece only, and you do a good job. You should like write a whole book about the Lost world's future or something. It's seems wrong to just stop there.

Arthur and Maia are too sweet! Good work, i liked it very much!

I love this story! I'm glad you wrote Marguerite interacting with the children so well. I love the end when Roxton gives her a kiss and the fact that Malone and Veronica's son is named Arthur. Wonderful!

Oh, that's sweet.

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this was a good story

Great Story. Good read. Maybe you should consider writing more sotries in the future.

Just reread this and loved it again! I really think you should expand on it- that'd be great! :-) More of a history of how they came to have children, and maybe getting off the plateau with the children! I loved how Veronica and Ned's son was named after Summerlee! Danielle :-)

Aaaaaawwww shucks!

So lovely Trinity!

one of my fave lost world fics! it's so sweet and cute. i love how marge and roxton are finally together! please write more!