Reviews for The Substitute

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Miguel51 2008-05-16 ch 18,	abuseWell, um... That ending sucked.
Miguel51 2008-05-16 ch 9,	abuseCan't believe I hadn't read this one already. Good flow, interesting concept. Lorelai jealous rocks. Just gonna take a break now and finish this laters.
colorscope 2007-05-18 ch 2,	abuseThis is my first foray into JavaJunkie and thank you very much for addicting me. You are awesome.
l catch l 2007-03-17 ch 18,	abuseoh, this is just sad. Such a good story, such good characterizations, and so close! Oh, the injustice of dropped fanfictions! Despite the three plus years of hiatus, will we get a chapter 19? Chapter 20?
AmazinglyMe 2006-10-07 ch 18,	abuseWow. This story is amazing. The dialogue is great and the characterization is great. It feels like it could be an episode (or three) from the real show. I love the pop culture things that Lorelai and Rory randomly throw out there, and I love that Suki and Rory have a role, even though this is a Lorelai/Luke story. I'm glad you didn't just shunt them off to one side. Everything just seems fantastically believable, and I'm rooting super hard for Lorelai and Luke in this story. Reading this has been so much fun. I'm completely obsessed with this story, which is why I'm rather distressed to see that you haven't updated it since '03. =[ Sad face. But I totally understand that sometimes stories get dropped. Or, you know, life gets in the way of fanfiction. Anyway, even if this story is completely gone, never to be updated again, I wanted to let you know that I really, really, loved it. It's fantastic. So thanks for writing something this good, and this enjoyable to read. ~ AmazinglyMe
Gilmoregrl519 2006-09-23 ch 18,	abuseso u r just gonna leave us there? Come on, i know it's been what? over 3 years, but update!
chemqueen 2006-07-17 ch 18,	abuseupdate. update. UPDATE.
cywen69 2006-05-25 ch 18,	abuseThis was such a great story, I can't believe you didn't finish it. This was by far one of the closest fanfics to come so close to the actual show I ever read. I am so bummed you didn't finish it. I guess after all this time I can't convience you to finish it. I would absolutely love it if you did though. It was so good. I laughed, I cried, and now I'm hoping. I love you sense of humor. I LMAO so much reading this today. You also had their characters dead on. I only wish it had a conclusion, but I guess I can imagine one. Not as fufilling though. Oh, you need to read irish-surf-chick's Girl Next Door. It is so much like this story it's uncanny. The end of her chapter 9 is almost vebatum to your L/L shower scene only without the shower. The Dialog is so close I wonder if you both got it somewhere else. I've been reading her story from the beginning, so when I read yours I thought I may have read it already. But it was set differently. It blew my mind. Wendy
cywen69 2006-05-25 ch 13,	abuseI am enjoying this story so much. (LMAO - funny) I loved the baseball and football games. The character interaction is perfect. I love the dirty sexual inuendo the most. The only thing I can criticize is I would prefer Joe Perry over Steven Tyler any day. Joe is definately the hotter of the 2. I love his chest. So, so hot. Wendy
electric pancake 2006-04-02 ch 18, anon.	abuseNo! You can't have not finished it! Or maybe you did finish it but never posted on this site. Why? WHY? Same with 'Not Enough'. I would use multiple letters and exclamation marks to convey the great angst I feel about these two stories not being finished but will censor me. Bwahaha, Kirk. Anyway. I really like your gilmore girls stories. They're very good, and actually FUNNY too. So. Yeah. Well done.
Muffin Is Injured 2006-03-26 ch 18, anon.	abuseI just don't understand how you can leave all these hints about chapters to come and how many are left and whatnot and just... leave us hanging. You probably have the damn things WRITTEN the way you talk about them, or at least planned out very descriptively. You're a fic-tease. That's the worst kind. You leave us hanging at the worst possible moments (this goes for Never Enough too). I mean I understand the leaving fan fic thing, by all means, knock yourself out and leave all us strange people. But at least try and wrap things up... evn if it's a six word chapter saying 'eventually luke changes his mind and they did the horizontal hokey pokey and all is happy oh yay oh joy' or something like that. Yes, I do realize that is over six words, but I'm sure you grasp my general displeasure. I don't know why I torture myself reading your stories... oh yeah because they're friggin GOOD. It's like this bittersweet, depressing crap I put myself through. I can't even fully love this fic because in the back of my mind, the haunting thought of YOU NEVER EVEN FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS, BITCH is fluttering rudely. No closure, no... nothing. And you know what? Garbo is a bad role model. Yeah. I'm offically going to be in a funk all week. All that wasted talent...all that un-had sex. All your fault.
Lolabelle26 2006-03-26 ch 18,	abuseOMG! 3 YEARS! that is one hell of an ASP cliffhanger. i know it's been a LONG time, but please one more chapter? PLEASE!?
EternalConfusion 2006-03-12 ch 18,	abuseAww, wow...it's been like what, three years and those chapters are still missing. Aww... :( Neverming, it's a great fic, and I kinga guessed about the whole Jay/Kirk thing and wow...yeah so. Cool fic.
BluJPlover 2006-02-25 ch 18,	abuse-Whimpers- wheres more of the story ? I read it all in one very long sitting..and now im sad because its not over but its over.I wanna know what happens next.I have to tell you I loved the story so far..even if..you like havent` updated in three years-Sorry just alittle upset...I ned more.-but anyways it was good while it lasted and i have a feeling it will be a fic i will continue to read over and over and over again.:)
thefictionalfreak 2006-02-24 ch 18,	abuseaw come on now! you have to update! I will go crazy if i dont get to read the next chapter! I mean it! like sphyco crazy! no joke. i absolutely love this story, i must read more! pretty pretty pretty please? ill love you forever... :D ok well im begging you.. please!

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