aaawwwww! your write really cute stories :)

so good

aw I loved it! thats so sweet! Gohan would so do that 4 his little bro... and that mock salute thing funny!

You focus so well on the relationships between your characters. I love how you managed to create the perfect big brother/little brother interaction between Gohan and Goten. I also thought the part with Trunks falling asleep next to Vegeta was very funny. You're a terrific writer. Great work!

You've got that right - Gohan's an amazing older brother. It's just too cute... I love your ficcies so much! Never stop writing! -

another sweet, lil songfic from the Queen of Songfics herself...hehe...it's very sweet, but if you ask me, there's no such thing as TOO sweet...so, keep 'em comin! .

AW! THAT WAS SO ADORABLE! NOW WRITE ME A TRUNKS/VEGETA BONDING FIC (i dont mean shounen ai, those 2 2gether is icky...)!

Aw... I'm sure that's what most everyone who reads this will say. But it really is cute. I love the relationship betwen Goten and Gohan. It's absolutly adorable.

Aw...

You really have a talent for making an audience say "Aw...". LOL. Keep it up! I enjoy those kinds of fics.

Bye,

AAS

*wipes a tear from either eye*

Too sweet for words!

Jeez, I'm just a sap *grins*

Kep 'em comin', hon!

kk

*sigh* your really good a writing these things you know... another touching one i have to say. Very cute!

Aw! How really cute. You're right it is a good way to end them. And you're good at this. Need help with writing story up on the site. Help email me! bye Annunduil.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Too cute! Too cute! You are really good at these stories.

Again: how do yousa do it? So kawaii! _ the only thing mesa would change though, is scrolling sideways. Mesa no like that, but great job!

YLG,

DS

Cute! Gohan is sooooooo nice!