This story is fabulous and well written. I loved it but you hid it's brilliance with its uncatching summary and non-existent title. It's a wonderful story, but I almost missed it!! Fix it, please!!

Smiles and best wishes...

I do believe this story brought tears to my eyes... it was that powerful. You write wonderfully, I loved your story!

Wow that was really good it was extreamly entertaining!!!!! One problem IT'S OVER!!!!!!!!
If you get the urge to write a sequal i'm definately all for it!!!!

Undoubtedly one of the best stories! Excellent tale. You should really think of a title for it. Perhaps "The Road to Hell"? I don't know - not feeling very creative right now.

But this story was absolutely fantastic. The backstory was well thought out and equally well written.

OOoooOOooo *is misty eyed* its over.... :*(

Sequel?


This was fantastic I loved it. Your writing is fantastic as is your style (Yes, you have a specific style)

Hey..just wanted to say I love the story. This is further pushed my urge to write a 13 Ghosts fic too. I really hope you do a squel to this one cause I want to see your view point of Cyrus using Dennis. Hope to see more of your work. I just wish 13 Ghosts fic wasn't so rare

Huh, coolness-ville. You're so good at the composition of the plot. I love the part where Dennis walks away from the presentation. The only prob. is no title, but it doesn't matter that much. Great job either way.
Peace

BRAVO! What a great ending to an excilent story! *claps hands* yay! Good work, I don't know what else to say. :)

The little touches you gave Dennis made the story more realistic. This was incredibly well written and I could see every moment as if it were being shown in the movie. Well done. I hope you write more with Dennis. You seem to have incredible insight into his mind.

It's over? Just like that? Oh my god! That was so trippy!!! I don't know what else to say other than it was such a champion peice of work. The way you ended it was just so....amazing, if you know what I'm going on about. Keep writing, even if it isn't this fic because you are one very very fantastic writer!!
take a lolly from the big jar
I salute you!

This is simply fantastic! It's like you helped to create the story. The pasts are flawless and entirely plausible. Eveything ties together and brings incredibly believeability to the tale. Great job. Update soon!

Update soon! I want to hear what happens next. Also this story seems to have a blend of the Ninth gate as well. I love the detale of the story and how you fleshed out the characters very nicely!

All I can say is Wow and update ASAP!!!! And hurry!

Yay! Dennis!
That was my first thought before reading your wonderful, terriffic, amazing, detailed story!!!!!!
I liked Dennis...too bad he died ; _ ;
I love Matthew Lillard too, he was GREAT! : ) I can't wait for further chapters this story is SO good! Yay, yay, yay, happy, happy, happy!

Um, but one thing, I don't think Dennis would say ** as much as he does, that just kinda doesn't seem like him....oh well maybe it's me? Anywho love your story keep writin' ! You should go professional! ^_^

This is really good! I'm usually not really into these kinda fics but hey, urs rox, what can i say!