This is great! I can't wait to read more of your story. I love Jesse, hopefully next chapter he'll do something big. Keep going...

Please update soon! I really what to know what happans.

hey, great job! i hope u post more chapters soon, cause its really good! very interesting! keep it up! :D

Yay! An update! Well...updates just lead me to wanting more. Update soon...again!

ooh ooh twist! very clever fic and very brilliant too! hehe, love the b/s and lets hope that amelia girl isnt too much trouble :)

I'm so glad you updated!

Great story, but the grammar is terrible - sorry. Spelling mistakes and grammatical errors make it a tough read. Maybe find a Beta reader to help you proofread before posting?

Yes, I remember Brennan riding his motorcycle in the eppy. Ok, I am sorry but from reading some of the previous reviews people should keep their mouths shut. They don't have to review if they hate it. I personally love this story. I think your plot is great and it is different, that's why I love it so much. Everyone trys to stick too much to other plots and it drives me crazy. Ok, I hope to hear more form ya.

Cool plot, keep it going! Excellent build-up of suspense. But one word of advice: a beta-reader is always a wonderful thing. :) Susan

Post the next chapter very soon!

I want to know what happens, hoefully there's a lot more Brennan and Shal.

more please! please update soon!

please update son!

You got to update real soon please!

Good Job! Love where it is going. Please continue and more Brennan!1

Brennan not brennon.