 RachelAshley 6/14/01 . chapter 1Lol. It's really sweet and has the fine touch of humor to it. Keep it up! . |
 Bella Ragazza 3/9/01 . chapter 1oooooh i love it! theres way too many of these up here..but, yours is done with grace and talent! |
 Latest Mistake 10/11/00 . chapter 1Two dance scene fics in a week! I really don't know which one I like better...how you portrayed Squall was just wonderful. See this is how I imagine that scene...and I love how you had Squall feeling so strange and confused...all at the same time. Squall was totally captivated by Rinoa! That's why he was so mean to her later. I'm telling you. Did I mention the last two sentences were simply beautiful? They were. You need to fix your summary though...because I wasn't going to read this because I didn't know what it was about. |
 Circe 10/11/00 . chapter 1 Great story Astarte! "Just another battle. Only this time, it's me versus my feet." I think that's the best description of dancing I've heard in a long time! Keep up the great work! |
 murdermostfowl 10/11/00 . chapter 1The good ol' fashioned down home FF8 style! |