Reviews for sic transit vir

Anhelita 2003-01-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseT.T You killed berto. YOU KILLED BERTO! I think he's cute, how could you kill him? but really i liked it. it was great! buuuut.... you snif killed sob BERTO! WAAAAHH!T.T
Talia Ali 2002-11-10 ch 1,	abuseAwwww... that's sooo sad! Well written, but still. ~sniff~ I feel horrible for Berto's family, and for Max and Rachael. Keep writing.
Keemew2 2002-10-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseEvil person. EVIL!!! You killed my Bishie!!! Woops, this ain't anime, umm...I just forgot everything I learned in spanish class. I'm such an idiot. NEwayz...YOU KILLED BERTO!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU!?!?!?!?!?! Your're an evil, evil, evilevilevilevilevilevilevilevilevilevil PERSON!!!! Meany. Good story though!!! "^_^"
Kiara 2002-08-17 ch 1, anon.	abuse:) I LOVE IT!!! Sorry, but I'm just a big huge fan of "Kill a character, and hopefully one of the main characters that isn't the 'star'" fiction. And you seem to have done it pretty well. :) Keep up the good work
andrewjameswilliams 2002-08-10 ch 1, anon.	abuseBrilliant story. Sad but very very good.
NikiJ 2002-08-09 ch 1,	abuseOH MAN. SNIIIIIFFF Keep writing. As sad as this was, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Kurayami Kifuji 2002-08-08 ch 1,	abuseThis has been of the BEST Max Steel fan fics I have ever read! Where the hell do you get your ideas? Right now I am still having WRITER'S BLOCK for my next Max Steel fan fic. The first one is called "Top Secret". I would appreciate if you can READ and REVIEW it. Domo Arigato ~Little Anya~