this was sad. i think the princess saria was talking about was zelda but thats just me.

8/10

It was...just so...*burst into tears* beautiful!

Sad, but very very true. Personally, I'm a Link/Zelda shipper, but the close friendship Link and Saria share cannot be ignored. You portrayed this accurately and very well. If you're into this sort of fics, why not check out my fic "Still Just A Little Boy"? It's a Link POV.

Great job. Keep at it!

Awww that was so sad. It was really good though! The Kokiri children don't die when they leave the forest. Remember at the end of Ocarina of Time when everyone went to Lon Lon Ranch? The Kokiris were there as well. Anyway, great story.