please! this has great potential in becoming a great story! please continue it!

Ahah! You know how to make suspense, I never thought about his "problem" while I was reading you story! And then, BUM! Suspense! Great ) please, continue!

Hmmm...This sounds like a good ending to add curiousity and I say your story can lead to many possiblities. Your story's ending is good because it leaves the readers (well, me at least) think about how the story would continue at and end. Besides since it's completed and you don't add much more than this, people won't get disappointed or sad with how the story ends. Because their ending for your story would be how they see the end for it. :D I am already getting ideas for how the story goes! But of course that is my opinion and my way of seeing how your story gives imagination to me. Really good story btw too! _

This story is off to a great start! I hope you continue on with it!

lovely! You have a sequel?

Hoooo.
Poor Bilbo. But I love it!
Would you please make a sequel.
It would be fantastic!

Bonne journée

Oooh, this is very interesting, can't wait what happen next.

PLEASE continue