|Reviews for Innocence|
| UKReader 5/5/13 . chapter 27
Great chapter and tense cliff-hanger. Sorry I haven't reviewed before now.
Hope revision is going well and that you'll hopefully be able to update soonish? :o)
| 13tash07 4/27/13 . chapter 27
I love this fic. Any chance of seeing an update?
| Guest 4/1/13 . chapter 27
Your story is amazing. Your characterisation is basically perfect. Your OC isn't a sue. But your writing itself is littered with mistakes - you should try to find a beta. It'll make your already fantastic story perfect.
| Guest 3/31/13 . chapter 3
i'm hooked and looking forward to reading more.
ruth & harry? maybe?
| Abigal 3/31/13 . chapter 27
Please add complete when finished hate cliffhangers.
| rosetintedblindspot 4/1/13 . chapter 27
Aaaargh, how could you leave it there?! Great chapter as usual. Thanks for sharing it.
| Sparky75 3/31/13 . chapter 27
Now that's a cliff hanger and a half. I'm hoping very much that somehow they manage to resuscitate Ruth some how and all she (and the rest of the team )have been through. Here's hoping you'll be able to update quickly (around all your revision of course :-) )
| Antonia Caenis 3/31/13 . chapter 27
aaarrrggghhh, you can't leave it like that! Talk about hanging on by our fingernails...! Another amazing instalment taking it right down to the wire and then leaving us all dangling, awesome stuff. And I did love Ros being Ros, merrily snapping bones to get what she needs!
| NatesDate 3/31/13 . chapter 27
That's a doozy of a cliffhanger! Thanks for sharing.
| LadyDunla 3/31/13 . chapter 27
Oof, what a cliffhanger and what a tense chapter. I did however spot some weird gibberish words in the chapter. Don't know if that was intentional?
Anyway, I loved it. Had another edge-of-my-seat-experience. Well done!
| Sparky75 3/27/13 . chapter 26
I know Harry had no choice but what a horrific decision for him to make! I'm hoping that Ros has picked up on a mistake by Jamal and there is still time to save Ruth... please!
Fantastic writing once again and Jamal is a fantastically horrible creation! Well done!
| rosetintedblindspot 3/27/13 . chapter 26
Great chapter as usual, I'm relieved he made an error! I hope this is not another twist from you (fingers crossed!). Thanks for writing and sharing it.
| NatesDate 3/27/13 . chapter 26
Harry really didn't have a choice but I'm glad to see that they may be able to follow someone and hopefully still find Ruth. Thanks for sharing.
| UKReader 3/27/13 . chapter 26
It's a great chapter as usual. No need to worry at all.
Very clean, clear and still tense.
Thanks for another great one.
| Antonia Caenis 3/27/13 . chapter 26
Wow, the tension and intrigue just keep ratcheting up on this story! I'm still hanging out for a satisfactory ending where we don't lose anyone apart from the hideous Jamal and his mates... I did love Ros giving in to her baser instincts and slamming his head on the desk, although I'm sure she would have preferred targetting somewhere lower on his body if she could have got there!