Rahkshi, eh? Oh dear god...
Ahh! I want to know who the four armed bloke is!

I'm really impressed with the increase in quality of your writing. Case in point - the blood drained from my face when I read the part about the Rahkshi. Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Tight situations... good plotline... I LIKE IT! :D
I'm liking this stuff! As good as its prequel!

It's nice to see how much your writing style has advanced from your first story. Good characters and an interesting story. Hope you update it soon.

This was pretty good, it was well written and it looks to have an interesting plot, I'll keep an eye out for more, keep up!