This was sooo sooo cute! Well done! :D You are an amazing writer! keep it up!

This was really cute and sweet. I really liked it. You're pretty good at doing kissing scenes.

I liked how you Roxas think back on Xemnas's tools of manipulation/lies. Great work, I liked the story a lot, even if it was fast.

AW! I LOVED THIS! SOOOO SWEETTTT! And you do look a bit like namine but personally I think You are more pretty! :D

really cute loved it

AWW! SO SO CUTE! I love this story! Excellent job! ANd I'll take your word for you saying you look like Namine...but I just see a picture of Roxas! XD

AAHHHHHHH! SO CUTE! AND YOU LOOK LIKLE NAMINE! LUCKY!

Wow, you are gourgous

AHHHH! YOU ARE SO AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL AND A GREAT WRITER I LOVE YOUR STORIES MUFFIN! ;)

This was SOOOOO ADOURBLE ARI! Wow...and that's really you? Holy shit...you have grown up into such a beautiful lady! OMG If I still lived in hollis you would be ALLL MINE! ;)

Awheee adorable:D kinda reminds me of Star Wars at the endXD this Is amazing:)

Twas awesome.

This was really good!