|Reviews for Heavy In Your Arms|
| Vampgirl79 5/8/13 . chapter 112
First I admit, I read this awhile back. But didn't have the chance to review it, so here I am :) Just wanted to tell you that once again you did an amazing job with another drabble. God you seriously know how to write the angst! Even thought Edward was a dumbass for leaving Bella the way he did, I still understand why he did it. But his actions indeed brought out some consequences. Holy crap I was blown away by that twist! Alice, oh why Alice?*shakes head* I dont think I ever disliked an Alice like I did in this one. She was horrible ;( What she and the Volturi did to him, and then there's Bella...Oh my god Bella! *sigh* What happened to her ;( Yeah that's right that's the result of Edward breaking her heart. Such a shame! And out of all people who helped him out was Jacob, wow! Such twists in this story bb, I loved it! Im so glad that Jazz and Em came to Edward's rescue. Poor guy was this close to really losing it ;( The guilt he bears alone over leaving Bella, what happened to her as a result and then when he killed that girl. My god how much more can one person take with all the pain and remorse? *sigh* Beautifully written! And dang you had to leave us hanging like that with the end? Oh girl, why, lol! Now I have to figure out the rest in my mind. Hmm..I imagine Edward going to Volterra, trying to win Bella back but it wont be easy. But eventually they work things out and fall in love again. Bella, I would hope, then kicks Alice's evil ass and Jazz dumps Alice too! I dont know... but I am you would have ended it better than what I just said, lol. Anyhow, awesome but heartbreaking story hun. I really enjoyed it :) Ttys, xoxox
| mandy52799 5/5/13 . chapter 112
I kind of hate you right now LOL..I was really into this story on the edge of me seat and then it was like...bam..no ending :(
| smooshie55 3/11/13 . chapter 112
Oh fart, that was the last chapter.
So I have to use my own imagination on the ending? That's really rude. That's what you are here for! I can't imagine for shit!
Oh what am I saying? I can't be mad at you, you gave me a shout out. Plus, I don't even know you. And I'm too busy holding grudges against people I know.
Seriously, this was a wild n' crazy ride & I enjoyed every confounding, depressing, mentally unstable bit of it.
Sorry for the review spam! I just needed to read it all at once so I didn't get confused. I totally did anyway HAHAHAHAHA
| smooshie55 3/11/13 . chapter 111
That's a massive twist to throw at us in the second to last chapter! Whaaaat?!
| smooshie55 3/11/13 . chapter 110
That's a serious mind-fuk. What Bella & Alice did.
| smooshie55 3/11/13 . chapter 109
It'll be so weird with no Bella or Alice.
| smooshie55 3/11/13 . chapter 108
That's right! And Cullen's kick ass! Beat that chest:-)
| smooshie55 3/11/13 . chapter 107
It's always awkward to tell someone their mate has cracked up and turned to the dark side. It never goes well.
| smooshie55 3/11/13 . chapter 106
I'm nervous. Only a handful of chapters left. But this was so fun!
| smooshie55 3/11/13 . chapter 105
Uh oh. Hopefully he's weak enough for Em & Jas to stop him.
| smooshie55 3/11/13 . chapter 104
Aw, his brothers are there to save him. Love it
| smooshie55 3/11/13 . chapter 103
| smooshie55 3/11/13 . chapter 102
Haha, it's like when you've been on a diet for so long & you're like I would slaughter a basket of kittens for a burger right now. Edward, I totally get it:D
And no, of course his coven/family wouldn't judge. They never judged him like he judged himself.
| smooshie55 3/11/13 . chapter 101
He's getting help?
| smooshie55 3/11/13 . chapter 100
No way! Jake figured it out? Whatever, yayyyyyyy!