|Reviews for The Second Chance|
| princess Serenity 014 5/19/13 . chapter 15
Like it keep up the good work huh!
| Callista Wolfwood 5/12/13 . chapter 15
| Crystal Saturn 5/11/13 . chapter 15
Miss Natasha! Loving the edits! Well done! Keep up the great work, girl!
| LoveInTheBattleField 5/11/13 . chapter 15
Keep it coming, Happy Mother's Day!
| GinnyPotter0183 5/8/13 . chapter 14
love the update
| big fan ana 5/8/13 . chapter 14
grate chapter I wish it was longer but im glad I read it hope u update soon
| AimlesslyGera 5/8/13 . chapter 14
I love how Darien gets told to stop the corny speeches. I was reading this in jury duty and got some stares when I kept giggling lmao
| LoveInTheBattleField 5/7/13 . chapter 14
Keep it coming
| Luna Goddess of the Night 5/7/13 . chapter 13
So sorry for the late reply. Nothing much to concrit on this end. Loved the piece between mother and daughter. Probably cause I'm a mama's girl at heart. Update soon!
-Luna, Constructive Criticism Guild
| smfan4ever72 5/5/13 . chapter 13
LOL! I love how Serena's parents' relationship was just like hers and Darien's... great twist!
| smfan4ever72 5/5/13 . chapter 12
Aw, I think my heart just broke...Poor Darien! I'm glad he straightened things out with Raye, and I hope he has something planned to win Serena back. Their relationship was so sweet before her memories were restored. *sigh*
| GinnyPotter0183 5/4/13 . chapter 13
I was hoping for some interactions between Serena and Darien.
| LoveInTheBattleField 5/3/13 . chapter 13
Keep it coming.
| Launcher 5/1/13 . chapter 1
Omg I love this story and im so glad you finally updated! I love the way you enhance the characters so they aren't as dopey as they are in the anime, but you still keep them true to their original selves.
I also LOVE the present tense point of view of this story. It's a refeshing change of pace from the standard past tense most writers seem to prefer.
Please, please, please keep up the fantastic work, and don't make us wait so long between
| Guest 5/1/13 . chapter 1
I like the idea of the story but there is something about the way it's written. The grammar and spelling are perfect (as far as I can tell) but the flow of story feels abrupt. It's like I couldn't quite connect with the emotion conveyed. I'm reading it,it's flawless, yet, I'm NOT feeling it.