Like it keep up the good work huh!

Update!

Miss Natasha! Loving the edits! Well done! Keep up the great work, girl!

Keep it coming, Happy Mother's Day!

love the update

grate chapter I wish it was longer but im glad I read it hope u update soon

I love how Darien gets told to stop the corny speeches. I was reading this in jury duty and got some stares when I kept giggling lmao

Keep it coming

So sorry for the late reply. Nothing much to concrit on this end. Loved the piece between mother and daughter. Probably cause I'm a mama's girl at heart. Update soon!

-Luna, Constructive Criticism Guild

LOL! I love how Serena's parents' relationship was just like hers and Darien's... great twist!

Aw, I think my heart just broke...Poor Darien! I'm glad he straightened things out with Raye, and I hope he has something planned to win Serena back. Their relationship was so sweet before her memories were restored. *sigh*

I was hoping for some interactions between Serena and Darien.

Keep it coming.

Omg I love this story and im so glad you finally updated! I love the way you enhance the characters so they aren't as dopey as they are in the anime, but you still keep them true to their original selves.
I also LOVE the present tense point of view of this story. It's a refeshing change of pace from the standard past tense most writers seem to prefer.
Please, please, please keep up the fantastic work, and don't make us wait so long between

I like the idea of the story but there is something about the way it's written. The grammar and spelling are perfect (as far as I can tell) but the flow of story feels abrupt. It's like I couldn't quite connect with the emotion conveyed. I'm reading it,it's flawless, yet, I'm NOT feeling it.