This was beautiful as well. Wonderful characterization, and I love the riff on trying to fly.

Lovely. John's emotions and memories are so clear; it's very evocative, beautifully written.

I haven't had time to read fanfiction in quite a while. Your story, heartbreaking as it was, was written so magnificently. Breathtaking. I especially loved the beautifully crafted beginning and end to chapter two. Lovely.

Stunning bookends of their lives of love, a wonderful story.

Beautifully poignant.