Oh wow! Nice story so far! So many possibilities and opportunities that can happen...so why haven't you updated lately? Oh, PLEASE update this story! It really is a great story! Tohru and Akito...ooh, so twisted in a way! No offense if you weren't going for "twisted"...I just can't find another way to put it...Sorry! -_-'''
(the CONTINUATION from my last review on chapter ten, because it got cut off accidentally. -titter/cough- Although you probably will never read this since your last update was four - oh no!, FIVE years ago, it's 2009 today/but technically just four years since it was July that you updat - ANYWAYS MOVING ON.)
Shigure as a villainous type of person never really crossed my mind. Well, maybe once or twice, but I never dwell on it since he's so funny and adorable in the anime. And I CERTAINLY have never seen Shigure as a villain in the fanfics. I haven't read many fanfics, really, on Fruits Basket, but I think enough. ; Hopefully, he's got more story than this, maybe anti-heroish background, or maybe a tragic history that leads to his shameless/sly submission to Akito. Honestly, I don't think in this story he passes as wicked/treacherous/black-hearted/-VILLAINOUS-villainous, but he's definitely a lot less friendly and cute yet more sly than normally portrayed.
"I suppose that's all you can expect of animals" DOH! That was MEAN! :( Very Akito-like, though, wonderfully put. But very cold-blooded of Akito. -depressing sigh- A very GOOD Akito, in terms of writing a story, a very VERY good Akito :D, but if someone says that in real life, awgh, that's harsh. I'd start crying if I was a Juunishi.
And eek, Yuki standing up to Akito is just asking for it, and I felt afraid for him. ;-; But I admire guys like that, because they'd do anything - even face their deepest, darkest fears for the ones they love. Even if in this story it's not romantic love that Yuki feels for Tohru, it's undeniably a type of love the Juunishi all hold for their little ball of sunshine and smiles, Tohru-chan.
And awhh ... (at the ending portion) Yuki was so brave! I can fall in love with a guy like that easily. BUT! Our focus today is our possessive and brutal Akito-sama!
What about school? I had this in mind for a long time, but I keep forgetting to review and ask because I wanted to keep reading. O_O I can assume this is summer (due to Tohru's fainting spell) for now, so they can be having summer vacation, but sooner or later, she's going back to school, right? Cause Akito goes to school, too - I think it was an all boys school. It'd be interesting if you made wrote about the school and stuff. :D
Also, I LOVE how 'in-character' Akito seems. I have no idea how 'she' is in the manga, and I haven't even seen the anime in a long time, but from my memory, your Akito is so Akito-esque! He likes to psychologically make everyone feel like they're to blame for everything and they're the ones at fault for everything. He likes to make them feel like they should be grateful for this and that when it's just so ... kinda basic. He's almost bordering inhumane, but inside he's just so frustrated and angry and lonely and ah.
Just thought I'd say that I love this piece. I hope you get a chance to finish it sometime. I find Akito's possessiveness toward Tohru strange yet intreging. In all of your Fruit Basket pieces, you are able to create vivid settings and distinct personalities. Great work, I love them all.
plz o plz o plz o plz update this soon! I really love it! And I'd LOVE to see jealous/possesive Akito-especially concerning Yuki's feeling for Tohru and his being angry at the thought that she has feelings for Yuki as well.
hi this is a great story. How are they going to get Tohru back, or is Akito going to fall in love with Tohru and become nice? Why havent you finished this, I really want to know what's going to happen.
Umm...are you aware that Akito is a woman? I finished up fruits basket when i was in japan, err... maybe i shouldn't have told about that...yeah spoilers...er...apologies
Ahem Now that I've gotten that out of the way, I noticed it's been years since you last updated (quite literally), and I was really hoping you didn't give up on this story. I just started reading it today, and I love it! The character's personalities all seem to fit perfectly, and the plot is very entertaining. I really hope you'll keep working on this story.