|Reviews for What If?|
| m0ckingbird77 5/23/13 . chapter 14
AHHHHHHHH! Sorry, but I could totally see the writers doing this to us... Oh, you're brilliant. Actually, this is how I want them to resolve it...yes, that would be perfect! I mean, it's just like Brennan to be so blunt and surprise him in that way. Gahhhhhhh... :D
| Guest 5/22/13 . chapter 14
Loved it. Brennan once she gets into the mood enjoys surprising people especially Booth and she would turn this on Pelant at some point.
| SchwuppDiDupsi 5/22/13 . chapter 14
| jsboneslover 5/22/13 . chapter 14
Love cheeky Bones! And loved the author's note. It is ALWAYS the busiest people who get an impossible number of things done. Thanks for making time.
| Guest 5/22/13 . chapter 5
Will there be a sequel for this chapie?
| Rangers042376 5/22/13 . chapter 14
| babyface99f 5/22/13 . chapter 14
Thank you for making it bones and booth again :) it is hard to see them with anyone else:)
| ebrillblaiddes 5/20/13 . chapter 13
But Curt was supposed to be gay! *pout*
(Seriously, that would have completely explained the sleepy phone thing, I could totally see Bones volunteering to split a tent with a gay dude.)
| pampilot67 5/20/13 . chapter 13
Why was Curt answering her phone, in a sleepy voice? They seems to inbly more happend than Bones is saying and by telling Booth he could not come home yet.
I think moe has to be said about her time away.
| Mei-Lin200 5/20/13 . chapter 13
Actually crying right now. Really good. I did find it hard to believe brennan would kiss someone else though. For all her rationalizing it is not something I think she would be capable of doing.
| jsboneslover 5/19/13 . chapter 13
I found the Brennan leaving (particularly without Christine) and kissing someone else completely implausible, but that's just me. I hope that it doesn't actually take Bones this long to figure out that Pelant is behind the sudden change in demeanor and desire of Booth. He is always about protecting her, and why should this be different from the line he drew when Cam was hurt?
Also, I do like the idea of the next one being about Max, because I truly believe it will be Max that takes Pelant out of commission. As good as Pelant is at manipulating the grid, Max is good at being off of it. They are polar opposites, but Max's love for his daughter - even if he has to lose or risk his own life in the process - will make him the winner.
| Rangers042376 5/19/13 . chapter 13
I love how "normal" you write the characters. Going through something the way couples in real life go through them (God knows the show writers have no inkling on real life).
| Beth 5/19/13 . chapter 13
Thanks for the followup chapter. Curt needs his ass kicked
| babyface99f 5/19/13 . chapter 13
Please continue and have her figure it out so they can get back together :)
| Guest 5/8/13 . chapter 12
Sorry, but you need to continue this story! You can't leave it like that!