Loved this story!

Being surrounded by men mainly I notice the prevalence of men in this story... and quite a few of them are 'machos'. You show a profound knowledge about the topic ;-)

Great last chapter! I loved Rhinelander stopping Cranston, you really succeeded in bringing the character to life! The "what's-his-name" bit at the end was lovely, it really fells like the story has come full circle. Great job!

Wonderful story, I love Mike and whats his name. LOL, Im not sure whats going on with fanfiction haven't been getting my notifications im glad I check on my favorites, looking forward to more of your stories

Absolutely loved this! You had Skowlownowski down to a tee!

Kelly?! Ha! That was just the icing on this terrific story. I could just picture Steve's face as well as hear Mike's voice as he teases him.

You also had just the right level of H/C mixed in with all the action and drama. Mike's emotions and reactions were portrayed strongly and definitely in tune with the series.

Loved the way Rhinelander helped Mike by taking down Cranston and Mike's "strategy" to get the crook into spilling his guts was something he would very likely come up with.

The humor and banter toward the end was great and provided some comic relief to the suspenseful opening.

All in all, another fine piece to add to your collection, meixel :-)

This may be a shorter chapter but it was packed with all good things that left me wanting more. I hope Mike will be alright.

Mike, be careful when you leave Steve alone!
All sorts of things can happen to that particular inspector when he is on his own...

Great chapter! Of course Cranston's not just gonna leave for our heros to be saved easily. :) Can't wait for the next chapter!

As always another great story!

Liking the story, hope you update again soon

That Cranston character is quite smart... I'm afraid (or: hoping?) he could cause further trouble.
Great writing.

Shout out to David Bowie! Good chapter. I like the Councilman taking care of Steve - using his military experience. I also enjoyed the Steve/Mike banter. Thanks!

I'm so glad you continued this piece! Another great chapter, I really love the banter and the Heterochromia bit, of course does Steve know the name while Mike doesn't! :) So looking forward to the next chapter!

Woohoo! I was happy to see another chapter to this story and you've delivered nicely. Great banter between Mike and Steve and you also captured Mike's concern beautifully. Now I will try to wait just as patiently for the next installment.

Very promising! It is not very probable that the ambulance will just take Steve to the hospital and that will be the end of it, is it? No complaining, no complaining at all :-)