Oh me goodness! I can not wait for the next up date. It is so good. Please do not kill Ace. I will be so depressed if you did.

Please don't kill Ace T_T

Please let Ace live! Can't wait for the next chapter. Good job.

Okay, after 2 days of almost nonstop reading (LOL) I've finally made it to the end of chapter 23! I absolutely LOVE this story! I'm such a sucker for 'knight in shining armor' type of romances! This is just the kind of story I love! Thank you! I'm so sad that Ace is going to end up dying, though, but ...what a perfect couple him and Willow make!

My only critiques? There was quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes, but other than that you could not tear me away from this story! Can't wait to see how everything turns out (besides the obvious)! Bravo! :)

I hope Ace lives.

You what's really amusing? I used to like Teach because of that time with Luffy in Skypea and now I hate him sooo much. And Ace please stop interrupting Willow already! Geez! Love it! Can't wait for th next update

Yay chapter update :) nice job with it by the way, I hope things work out for Ace. Honestly boycotted one piece for a day when I found out why happens with Ace. He's by far my fav. Haha, plus him an Willow would be cuuuuttteeeeeee. But yeah, nice job, can't wait for the next update :)

Of course we don't mind if it's the English translations over the Japanese ones for the attacks :) As for the updating speed, just as long as you finish the story I don't think it really matters at all!

Ok, well, I WAS going to scream and rant and rave about stupid Ace unknowingly interrupting Willow's love confession ALL THE TIME, but when I read that he was doing it KNOWINGLY I was like awwwwww how sweet and promptly melted into a puddle of goo. Because that is just adorable, but also because if things happen like they do in canon then poor Willow will be devastated (as will I) at the inevitable...*sobs* death of Ace.

Hmm but if things do happen like in canon does that mean Willow will see Luffy again? Ohhh if she does then I could totally see her going with him afterwards to appease Ace's regret of not seeing Luffy grow up and become a great pirate and also to look after him because she knows how much Ace loved him (I mean he DIED for him after all) and she would like to honour her beloved's memory by looking after his most precious person aside from Whitebeard...whom, OMG I JUST REMEMBERED HE ALSO GETS KILLED.

NOOOOO I HATE YOU MARSHALL D. TEACH. Hmph he doesn't deserve the D. in his name, stupid backstabbing, ugly, pigheaded, joke of a person. Also Akainu for his direct role in trying to kill Luffy and killing Ace CAN JUST SUFFER UNDER ETERNAL TORTURE, death is too sweet for the likes of him.

Ok, that's all I have to say without going on and on (even though I've done that already). Hahaha I can't wait (but I will because I have to) for the next chapter.

Keep up the great work :)

Sorry I haven't reviewed before this, but can I just say I adore this story and Willow? _ I loved the fluff and everything that happened before chapter 21.

Which is not to say that I don't like your two recent chapters...I do, just not in the way one would enjoy reading fluff and a light-hearted fic...because chp's 21 and 22 are tearing at my heart strings terribly.

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE you are KILLING me here. I don't want to have to go through Ace dying again :( It'll just be too depressing for words and I'll feel so damn sorry for poor Willow. If you do decide to...kill off Ace *sobs grossly* again...just know that I hope Willow at least gets to see him up close and personal before that happens.

It's your fic in the end and I can't wait to see what you do with it. I'll be reading the rest with a sense of dread and anticipation.

Sorry if my review is too long and please keep up the good work :)

That was so cute! Its so annoying that she cofesses and he keeps interrupting! Argh! Update soon I love it!

Aww how cute but why does Ace keep cutting her off when she's about to confess?!

I swear if Ace dies im going to cry my eyes out! And ill feel so bad for Willow its not even funny! Cant wait for the next chapter

please don't make ace die pleeeeeeeeeeease T_T

Oh my God that was sooo unexpected! Te way you were putting the story was sooo different that I did not see this one coming! Omg is Willow gonna come after him or what? Cannot wait for the next chapter already! Please dont die Ace!

Man Willow can be a troublemaker in her own way!