 SSJ5 Majin Jarkota 10/15/00 . chapter 1Good fic. Like the plot. I don't ean to criticize, but, last time I checked, it was Broadway, not Brooklyn, who held Angela's heart. Metaphorically, of course. BTW, I don't think I have to look up a whole lot of info on Agito Makishima (a.k.a Guyver 3 a.k.a. the Shadow Guyver), seeing as how he is (or soon will be) in my fic, Excalibur: Chronicles Of The Shadow Guyver. Doesn't folow the plots of the Guyver Manga, movies or Anime, but I like to be original. |