On the contrary, Spyro knowing of Fang and Silver's plans is quite lucky. If they can out run him, then Spyro will be aware of the danger that Sparx is in. This is an interesting story and I hope that you update soon.
One last thing though, you seem to be hitting the love/hate thing with Fang and Silver a bit hard on the head. As in, one day she is frusterated at having to work with fang and threatening to kill him, to fantizizing about him and flirting with him. Think about it.
So, update soon, I like this story. Good luck

Sorry for the late reply.

It's a very good chapter and quite a nice idea that you created with how it all started with Malefor. Very well executed. And his friend relations before his reign and the idea of introducing a new 'villain' to the scene is very well linked

On the downside; I really do disagree with your chose of name;it doesn't fit in with the type of character and its too human, your linking a to 'the real world'. Try avoiding using human names if possible, but don't get me wrong some names do fit with fantasy stories, just not many.

I did suggest a name to you in a PM in hoping it was a 'better' choice of name, but I have not had your decision on the matter and so will leave it at that.

In conclusion; a very good chapter, very initiative as usual, only improvements are very little details, but nothing to be of concern. I look forward to hearing from you on the next chapter and keep up the good work

Until the next chapter starts

This story reminds me a lot of the one that I'm working on right now, Great stuff so far. Keep up the great work.

oh shit he's not breathing!? Come on Cynder you can CPR him to life and get the extra perk of kissing him! lol.

Alright I read up to this point and I'm interested about the dream. I wonder, will this dream be the final outcome or can this be changed now that she's seen it? Well I'll have to find out.

I told you I'd read your story and the first real chapter was interesting. I'll have to read more when I get home.

Malefor's connection to Drake was pretty much my 3rd guess as to what this chapter was going to be. Now I'm pretty curious about these hybrid elements. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Well like the other chapters this chapter is just as amazing to read. I will be looking forward to read more.

I feel so stupid. I didnt make the connection that the Drake in this chapter and the Drake mentioned were the same dragon until almost the end. Well anyways, awesome as usual and hope to see a quick update.

You Need to Name Your Chapters,Put Titles in it

Hey, sorry this review took so long. I didn't notice this was updated. Anyways, amazing chapter with a nicely developing plot. Hope you update soon.

I love the idea of spyro and his 'alter ego' linking minds together. I think this is a great story but this chapter (so far) stands out to me and you really did use intuition for spyro. Very well done.

NEXT CHAPTER NEXT CHAPTER! Pleassssseeeeee! :D

I like this story a lot and I'm glad to see it updated but there this a big flaw in this chapter that is buggen me. Why didn't volteer or some one from the search party help free cynder or help that earth dragon from being killed by spyro? Unless I misted a part in this chapter they just stood there watching. Other then that it was a good chapter.

Hurray! An update! I kinda hoped Sparx's reaction would have been funnier, but regular shock works too. I can already guess about what the next chapter is, but I don't want to spoil it.