Your stories are professional worthy!(: Can't wait for more

Always glad to share ideas with a fellow writer. Hmm...King of Merury planning a strike...perhaps Princess Mercury could make a stand, unsurping the king himself. As to save Diamond...yeah, I got nothing right now. Take your time for updates.

-Luna

wow...this just went from bad to worse! And even though Serenity has kissed Diamond, she wouldn't have even started looking in his direction if Endymion hadn't cheated first and she could have done something about it.
Although, that's rather sneaky that the King of Mercury is an ally of the Phantom and his attack. Hopefully, someone can save the Alliance!
Can't wait for your next update!

This was quite lovely. I could see a mother doing what she can to keep her child alive. Maybe Demande could bring Serenity back by a kiss. Straight out of a fairy tale. Maybe some Saphir and Luna fluff could be nice. Update soon.

-Luna

please update new chapter

geez, Nephthys while understandable is really a weak thing! Does she have no confidence in her daughter's senshi abilities?
I still think Diamond should have told someone that he's protecting Serenity (just so they don't think he's the bad guy later!) but I'm also curious what Luna is going to say (or is able to say) when asked about why she thought Serenity would destroy Crystal Tokyo?
As a single reviewer, dispite everything that's going on, I think Endymion and Mars are FAR from being off the hook.
Hope you update soon!

I'm glad Mars got put in her place by Venus. I do have to admit that I feel a little bit sorry for her though. Regardless, I hate the way she and Endymion would hurt Serenity like that.

MORE
MORE
I want more...
what is going to happen?

Glad those two traitors (mars and endymion) were finally outed! I have no sympathy for either of them. Wonder what's going to happen next? Will Serenity survive? Will Mars be outcast from her court? (Kind of hope so. She has dishonored herself as a senshi guardian.)
I look forward to the next chapter!

Hi! Thank you for these two chapters. I'm sorry, Iwon't be able to review for each chapter because I'm very busy, but when it would be possible, I'll do it. Poor Serenity! Endymion is a real jerk to dare ask her why she seems sad. I would have thought he would have chosen Mars to stay with him to Earth during Serenity's journey, but, as Serenity said, he seems to rule wisely, by choosing to have Mercury stay behind to help him agains possible threats. Or has he something else on his mind?
Please keep up the good work. Until next!

very interesting and good i like it please write the next chapter as
fast as you can i would be very happy to read it. *cookies for you*

Wow, I would have slapped him! (Then again, I have a bit of blunt and sometimes short fuse. lol) Wonder what's going to happen? Tell us soon!

please write some more, this look awesome
what will hapeppen?
is going to be an attack to Nemesis?
are the senshis behind all these?
please write some more, so we know what is going to happen

please update new chapter let her divorce endymion and expose both mars and him to everyone

Great two chapters