I love the ending! Big Orange...kekeke, very humorous. After reading Sullivan's Gym, I kinda though Big Blue woulda killed them all! Actually kinda glad it didn't.

Heheheh. That was amusing!

Great sotry you just have to to explain this story happens then people will begin to be interested

Wahahahahaha! Ok, that was just funny! Great fic!

Poor Ash, I wonder how he's going to change that thing into a garydoes, or if even if he does if it even respect him. (remember Charizad?)

Heh! I bet Big Blue has been trying to get rid of his useless kid brother for ages. Well, don't despair Ash. Get him to lv 20 and you've got yourself a Gyarados. However, given Ash's past performance in levelling up Pokémon to evolve... ;-) BenRG's Rating 8/10. Much better than the 'Changes' trilogy. That was good, but I found it a bit depressing with all the death and angst.

Yay

Coooooool nice fic love Big Blue

great story cant wait unil the next part comes out

it sucked

Hey! That was great. I've heard a million people compare my stories to yours, so I *had* to come see what they were blabbing about, and I'm impressed. Better plot than mine, although might I suggest a little more description to liven it up though. But still, great story :-)

This was sweet

I'm in a great amount of suspense

Hmm... I have an idea! Write a sequel, and in the sequel, J&J attack Ash&Co. Ash has to send out Big Orange to protect Pikachu. It gets in James' way, and James, in his anger, kicks it. Hard. And we all know what happens when James kicks a Poke'mon... Hee hee hee... (start possible fanfic clip) "Karp? Magikarp!" "Outa my way!" *Kapow!* "Karp! Magi-" *Flash!* "Gyarados!" "Um... oops?" 'Big Orange stared down at the puny human who had dared harm it and hurt its master and friend. It didn't like this human. Or it's friend. Of the Meowth for that matter. It decided to show them a real attack. It powered up it's Hyper Beam.' "Um, Jessie? What's it doing now?" "I don't know... umm, Meowth?" "I tink dat ting's gonna attack us now..." "GYARADOSSSS!" *BOOOOMMM!* "Looks like Team Rockets blasting off again!" (End possible fanfic clip) Hah. I think you should do something like that! Or, maybe I will! I really love your stories, Dragoness! As another reviewer to anoter story said, "All hail Dragoness! DRAGONESS FOREVER!"

a magicra-carp, that big could be a verrrrrrry big Gyrados indeed... might just me by brain having been fried by that large clump of ginger, though.