wierd typos!
Unto
Artur
if YA notice
as I type this, (the comma instead of a period?)
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thats all I see... UPDATE! as usual thats what I want!

Love this! Update soon!

I don't know the story, but I'm very happy that Gilan came in. Sword fighting between people trained in it, I guess can come down to endurance. I hope the younger guy wins over the older one, who would kill two people just to prove a point.
In the paragraph where the burning of the bridge is described, bridge is used to much. You might want to vary the language or in some other way rework it, so that you don't have to repeat the same word over and over.
You use the phrase these turns of events. Since events is already plural though, a turn of events wouldn't necessarily refer to only one change in circumstance. I think it's safe to keep it as this turn of events.
I like it when you're categorizing the deep breaths and the one that the apprentice hears not being a tired deep breath, but the one that accompanies strong emotions.

Hey I like your story! Does anyone know of anyone...this is a really random question...who does like... LOTR and ranger apprentice crossovers?

Um... Good story! I don't read Percy Jackson soooooo... I'm gonna have to go with danger zone. Please keep updating!

Poor Gil...
I actually vote for Parallel!

very good chapter... even if it was just a filler chapter anyway yes update danger zone first please:D

This is actually quiet update again.

Ok ok. You haven't killed him...yet. But remember, you don't want to kill the love of my life. Cause I will find you. And. Yes danger zone is very good. Keep updating!

If you kill the hot one,... My gosh you don't want to know.

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Please don't drop this story! I really like this one:)

Gilan! noooooo

not to bad of a chapter. You are right, it is a little boring, and could have been better. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.