| Reviews for The Elite |
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All I Want Is To Be Wanted 5/19/13 . chapter 3loved it! please update as soon as you can! |
lilythemermaid 5/19/13 . chapter 3love it! :) pleeeease post the next chapter, like, NOW. haha but actually... |
Gilmoregirls1197 5/15/13 . chapter 3I'm so jealous that you met kiera cass! Your so lucky! Anyways great chapter |
maranda111 5/15/13 . chapter 3You met her! LUCKY! This chapter was nicely done. Do try and extend it some though. What did she eat? What did she wear? Who did she sit by? Small details like that really help paint the story. |
theselection-divergent-thehost 5/14/13 . chapter 3This was a really fantastic chapter! And I am SO jealous you got to meet Kiera Cass, that is so cool! Again, brilliant chapter and please please continue :D |
Maggiebswim 5/14/13 . chapter 2 I think you should review, like now, like asap |
grAce 5/2/13 . chapter 2 goodeieeeee! :D write more...NOW! OR ELSE! MU-GAHGAHGAH! |
swimmy6 4/29/13 . chapter 2THIS CHAPTER WAS SOOOO GOOD! UPDATE WITH ANOTHER SOON! |
flawed angel 4/14/13 . chapter 2Please don't take so long this time! I really am looking forward to your update! |
justholdyourhand 4/11/13 . chapter 2looooooove it! More please :) |
Saskiadesiree 3/26/13 . chapter 2I really like your fanfic, it feels like the most plausible one to me (most realistic plotlines, especially). I've spotted a few typos here and there, but overall it's proper English, which I can appreciate greatly. I really like your portrayal of Gavril, it's spot on! The only thing that bugs me is that the timeline isn't entirely clear (like, she falls asleep again after breakfast, so, how late does she wake up? noon, afternoon, evening? ) , but that could just be me not reading carefully enough. Keep it up. |
pllforever23 3/24/13 . chapter 2That was amazing keep going love it |
Anonymous 3/23/13 . chapter 2 Very good, I absolutely love The Selection. This is better than waiting for The Eite to come out. |
Literati Lover 3/22/13 . chapter 2Awe how cute. Can't wait for more!:) |
RaJang 3/22/13 . chapter 2I'm really enjoying the story tht now and I hope you get your computer back! Can't wait for the next update :) update soon! |